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demolished with love

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You build up your high fort walls,
I demolish them with love.
When nothing more stands, then we
Rebuild -  together.
Dodoitsu in structure - The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about love or humour. It has 26 syllables made up of four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively. It is un-rhymed and non-metrical.

generally the idea in this is some people end up isolating themselves due to something and build these metaphorical high walls around them - sometimes it takes love to pull them down like a bulldozer :giggle:
and then to in turn rebuild something new with someone new :)

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cr8edbyamy's avatar
Love it and it couldn't be more true. Just says it like it is. I like the way you explained it. You did that well.