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half idea i had put together with photoshop
in case the words are too unclear they read as follows

Bright stars in your eyes
From joy? Or from hidden tears?
Fame has a high price.


edit: in the original image as someone kindly pointed out i missed out one of the words in the second line thus making it only 7 syllables - the edit being a correcting of this

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LaughingGal13 Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Amazing
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:hug: thankyou so much for the compliment
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LaughingGal13 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
Your Super Duper Aleuper Welcome!
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katdesignstudio Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional General Artist
Interesting :)
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thankyou
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Jazzman1989 Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Student Writer
Very well done :nod:
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle: thankyou
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Jazzman1989 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009  Student Writer
anything for mah gemmys :smooch:
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KuBo88 Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
very nice work and very beautiful words
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thankyou so much for the compliment on this
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KuBo88 Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
youre so welcome pet :)
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's great - love the picture and the words.
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thankyou for the compliment - i am far happier that the mistake i made was spotted and reported and got fixed quickly though!
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Apheline Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love when you do this. Put pictures and words together. You always do it so masterfully. And this Haiku is brilliant. It's a shame you have to put a from in the second line, I really like the flow of it as it is.
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
well if i didn't then it ruins the haiku structure so yeah i had to re-edit it but it stil works with the picture and its not anything overly drastically different
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Chibi-Risu Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
yeah, i agree, it sounds better...
but it just doesn't work since it's a haiku~
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Apheline Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. But it still sounds good, just not as good :)
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Chibi-Risu Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
yup
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Chibi-Risu Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
In the picture it says 'From joy? or hidden tears?'

You left out the second 'from' making that line 6 syllables instead of 7.

But it's a great haiku and i love the picture~
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rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
ah typical! i think its sorted and i miss something so silly! - thanks for pointing out the error I'll get onto it and get it fixed asap!
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Chibi-Risu Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
k ^^
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
right its fixed now - i can't belie i didn't spot the error! thanks again for pointing it out !
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:iconchibi-risu:
Chibi-Risu Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
don't worry, everyone makes mistakes :3
and your welcome :D
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Luna-Realm Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Very nice
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thankyou glad you like it - i did make an error but i have fixed it - missed out a word when adding the text onto the image :doh:
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cplanetfan Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
Very good looking eye! So real
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:iconrockgem:
rockgem Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
well it was - it started off as a photograph of one of mine that i chose to edit in photoshop - the idea was to make this originally a very positive sparkly glitzy fame themed piece - but as i began to edit the picture it seemed a sad one so that's the theme/direction the piece took
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cplanetfan Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
It's very good, and it looks positive
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