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Written requiem;
The swansong of a poet.
Memorial verse.
a little idea i had that i needed to jot down.
thanks to =Jazzman1989 who suggested the title :heart:

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Created-By-Caz Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It's beautiful.
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rockgem Apr 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
simple but effective i guess - if only cause i wasn't sure how to really go about extending the 'swansong of a poet' line i had into something longer - so haiku suited it i guess - but at the same time i doubt it would have had the same impact if made lengthier
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Created-By-Caz Apr 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Small can still be beautiful and I think it suited the haiku very well.
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KuBo88 Apr 10, 2010
Very nice bit of musing. I see what you were probably were thinking there. I myself have several pieces of papers with musings on them. I have since tasked myself with compiling them.
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rockgem Apr 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
well i had one line of this but wasn't sure how to extend it but it fitted nicely win the 5,7,5 of a haiku so i went with it
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you have an amazing way with words
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rockgem Apr 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:blushes: you are too kind
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I'dlike to think I'm just kind enough :)
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rockgem Apr 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle:
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Jazzman1989 Apr 9, 2010  Student Writer
Beautiful and so saddening. I hope I can write something so beautiful and evocative as this. Fantastic work mah gemmehs :smooch:
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