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You demand those around you to strike up the band
And dance upon your  word
I realise;
You have zero musical talent
And yet you attempt to play the world like a fiddle
Trying to force it to your will
When it turned to its own rhythm
Eons before your ancestors took their first steps
You try to push things against the grain--
But you’ll learn one day
That you are not the conductor
Not of the world,
Not of destiny,
And last of all not of me.
some people won't learn...

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NemoX7 Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Never were truer words than these you have writ. I sometimes wish I could say the same to others I've encountered in my lifetime who tried to control me. You've done so in quite with finesse and eloquence. :)
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rockgem Oct 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
people will always try to exert a degree of control over others, sometimes its tolerable sometimes people push too far, its a matter of  coming to that point where enough truly is enough
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Created-By-Caz Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Some people are just like that and they never seem to understand why their behaviour causes trouble for them.
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rockgem Oct 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:nod: very much so it always causes such clashes especially when inevitably things contradict
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I love the turn in line 4.
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rockgem Oct 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thankyou kindly - its been far too ling since i wrote anything so i figured i ought try correct that between all the renovations going on around me haha!
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nofxmike06 Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
You're not the boss of me, now. AY!
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rockgem Oct 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle: a little of that but more so a little dig at someone i know who seems to think the world revolves round them.
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nofxmike06 Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
True. That sentence is slightly ironic since this was about the person who thinks everything is about them. I think thats why I like the work so much. It resonates on both sides of the argument.
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rockgem Oct 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
perhaps. but hte more ironic thing would be even if they read this they would have no idea the dig in it IS about them.
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